Давным-давно хотел написать песню на английском языке и вот, однажды, подходящая идея таки нашлась. Тут, опять же, творчество получилось коллективным, поскольку мой английский, явно, хромает, а вот Павел Юрьевич им свободно владеет. Без лишних раздумий я отправил "Метрополитеновского Иисуса" ему на редактирование.

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I’m the Metropolitan Jesus
Who is crawling in night
But I’m not friends with demons
I’m searching the light.

Those lights in all these people
Who are lookin’ me through
They got lost unforgivin’
But it’s blinkin’ in you.

I’m the Metropolitan Jesus
Who don’t want let you fall
I’ll keep sweetest kisses,
For you, first of all.

That underground’s tunnel
Will screaming your name
Meanwhile all my callin’
You at opposite way.

We are both in this darkness
Still looking for each other
Your name’s meaning kindness
As told me Godfather.

I’m the Metropolitan Jesus
I will not die on cross
There are so many reasons
Without you getting frost

I don’t wanna be famous
And friends like a Jude
But I want to see rainbows,
Sweet Maria, in you.

Without you Satan’s gaining
A power of mine
Evil force overwhelming
Will destroy our time.

There will be a Blackhole
Noone can survive
And is it a main goal
To be eating alive?

So find me, Maria
And save all this land
Gift me euphoria
Let’s break shitty end.

Hooray! Happy ending!
Hooray for the faith
Let us don’t offending
This story success.

It’s just for truehoping
It sings for true love
And spring will be awoken
By the liberty dove.

I’m the Metropolitan Jesus
Who were searching the light
A light between people
Who keep kindness in hearts.

19.04.2010 © Flash A. aka Сафронов Антон aka Файтонов Флэш

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После редактирования Павлом Юрьевичем текст приобрёл корректность без искажения основного содержания. Иными словами, всё, что я хотел сказать этой песней, осталось неизменным, разве что стало понятнее иностранному слушателю, ежели таковой найдётся.

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I’m the Metropolitan Jesus
Who is crawling at night
With no friends among demons
I’m searching for light.

Those lights in these people
Who are lookin’ through me
All got lost and forgotten,
But it’s blinkin’ in thee.

I’m the Metropolitan Jesus
Who will not let you fall
I’ll keep sweetest kisses,
For you, first of all.

Subterranean tunnels
Will be screaming your name
Meanwhile I’m calling
You the opposite way.

We are both in the darkness
Still looking for each other
Your name’s meaning is kindness
I’ve been told by Godfather.

I’m the Metropolitan Jesus
Will not die on the cross
There are so many reasons
Without you to get frost

I don’t wanna be famous
Neither have friends like Jude
But I need to see rainbows,
Sweet Maria, in you.

Otherwise “Shaitan’s” (Satan’s) gaining
Lots of power of mine
Evil force overwhelming
Will destroy our time.

It will grow into a black hole
That no one could survive
Is the goal we all pray for -
To be eaten alive?

So please find me, Maria
Salvage this doomed land
Bestow me euphoria
No one wants such an end.

Hoora to happy ending!
Hooray to rescued faith
Let us don’t be pretending
Story has no success.

For the hope really taken
For the song of true love
Spring now will be awaken
By the liberty dove.

I’m Metropolitan Jesus
And I’m searching the night
For the people who carry

Sparkle of goodness inside
Goodness up to their hearts
Into their hearts

22.04.2010 © Flash A. aka Сафронов Антон aka Файтонов Флэш
и
MontekristuM aka Воробьёв Павел aka Вагонский Павло