Vmesto Vashego "no ya ne xochu", Vy by napisali "no ya dumayu, chto doktor edvli okazhetsya sobesednikom bolee interesnym i zanyatnym, chem golosa, zhivuschie v moey golove." I kontzovka "uslyshannoe ya izlivayu v strochkax, i golosa nachinayut novuyu zhizn', poselyayas' v golovax chitateley." Pomnite, Ya Vam uzhe govoril, pro to, kak delaetsya shedevr? Mozhno nalit' tonny slovestnoy vody, no byvaet dostatochno i pary stro kotorye delayut vse v proizvedenii :))) Vasha zhe vech' chitaetsya vyalo, skazhem chestno, poydet tol'ko dlya samoizdata, i to, kak serednyachok :)))

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