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"Desmond will be supervising your efforts, and will gladly assist you in any way he can. Before we start - since Karmel is feeling a bit under the weather, I will "prescribe" to her a well deserving rest. I'm sure she won't mind going last! Rebekka, since you've been a good girl, you should have the honor of going first."
"It was hard to argue with Betzen, since the sedated Karmel wasn't close to functional at this point. Even if Karmel was responsive, she'd find a way defy Betzen at every opportunity. It wouldn't be a stretch to assume that this wouldn't be the last time Karmel would be drugged. This reminded me of my old school days, were I saw delinquents disciplined harshly. Despite Betzen's actions having been on an ENTIRELY different level, the similarities made my skin crawl."

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