Vmesto vsey etoy proxodnoy dryani, dumayu, stoit chitat' chto-nibud' by Neil Gaiman, estestvenno, v originale (English), a tam, glyadish', i texty Vashix (Revelate) pesenok, Vy zhe lyubite raspevat' na koryavom English' (Rusglish, to be more exact), stanut poumnee, pointeresnee, a samoe glavnoe, gramotnee - very close to the true English, unlike yours :))))) V samom dele, gde vy videli v English takie oboroty "Two and Two is Four", ili esche xlesche "Allow Me" (bukval'no po-russki "Pozvol' Menya") ? :)))

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